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Dave x Shy!Chubby!Reader: The huge Make Over

~Reader’s PoV~

“This is actually embarrassing…” You said, while writing your journal entry. You sighed. Man, you think you’re very hopeless romantic. Why? Because you are fat. . Many students in your school always teasing you. Like, that you’re a pig, chubby head and a hopeless romantic and fat woman. Man, those words are really hurt to your feelings. And you wished to be slim like your best friend Kanaya and Rose and the other girls before the prom. But for you, it’s very hopeless. You’ll be fat forever.  

“Hey, [Name]!” A voice said. You turned back. It’s your Best friend, Kanaya. “O-Oh... Hey…” You shyly said.

“You, I kept finding you, dear!” She said.

Your eyes are blinking in surprise. “Eh… Eh… S-sorry about that…”

Later, you saw your crush, Dave Strider, walking around with his best friend, John Egbert. Dave is the guy you’re crushing ever since you’re grade 1. But you sure he’ll NEVER EVER like you back, you think that he will hate you. If he knew that you’re crushing at him. So you keep it as secret.

Kanaya griped your hands and walked away. “Come on, [Name], Let’s go back to our classes.”

“A-Ah!!! W-Wait!!” you said.

-Timeskip! At Kanaya’s house…-

You lying on Kanaya’s bed and having a deep sigh. You every day visited Kanaya’s house. Sometimes, you stay overnight at her house. Today, you gonna stay overnight at her house again.

You’re very bored, so you opened your pesterchum account. And you see Jade, Rose, Jane and… John’s online. You sighed again. You wanted to talk to John, Jade and Rose but you’re very shy to talk to them. So you decided to talk to Jane.

--(chumHandle) [ ] began pestering gutsyGumshoe [GG] at 18:36—
[ ]: Uh…

[ ]: H-Hi Jane…

[GG]: Oh hello [Name]!

[GG]: What’s your doing today? :B

[ ]: …Um… Just pestering y-you…

[ ]: … H-How about you…?

[GG]: Oh, Same…

[GG]: Good thing that you’re pestering me today.

[ ]: O-oh r-really… T-That’s great… *sigh*

[GG]: Hmm? Is something wrong, [Name]?

[ ]: I guess… I’m not gonna go in prom on… Next next next month…

[GG]: Oh come on, [Name]!

[GG]: You’ll miss the fun!!

[ ]: E-eh… But.. I’m scared…

[ ]: Maybe many people will bully me.. And tease me… Even my crush…

[GG]: *sigh* [Name], I know you’re fat. I guess, you need some make over! Like.. You need to exercise everyday!

[GG]: And don’t eat too much!

[ ]: …Hmm.. Maybe it will help..

[ ]: Oh..! I..I g-gonna do something now.. So.. talk t-to you later…
[GG]: Okay [Name], bye!

--(chumHandle) cease pestering gutsyGumshoe [GG] at 18:55—

You sighed again. You really don’t want to go to the prom next next next month because of course, you’re fat. You’re sure NO ONE wants to date with you. Later, you BFF, Kanaya, opened her room door.

“Hey, [Name], what’s your doing?” She asked.

“Oh… N-nothing, Kanaya.. I-I just pestered Jane a while ago…”

“She said… The only way to solve my body problem is to… Exercise… And.. Don’t eat much…” You added.

“Jane’s said is all true. I know that you don’t want to go to the prom because you’re fat, and you think many people will tease you isn’t it? You friend said.

“Well then. You gonna do workout with me and Rose. Tomorrow MORNING. Did you get it straight, [Name]?

You nodded. Finally, someone will help you to solve the problem at last.

-Next day…-

“Okay, [Name]. You must do the jugging race at 10 rounds with Rose!”

Your eyes went wide in surprise. WHAT YOU’RE GONNA RACE WITH.. ROSE!? MAN, YOU SURE THAT YOU WILL LOSE!!

“W-What!? R-racing w-with Rose!? A-are you kidding me!?”

“Nope. She’s serious, [Name].” Rose said as she run away.

“A-Ahh!! W-wait up~!!” You said and run away too.

-30 minutes later…-

You are already lying on the ground, panting too hard.

“Want more, [Name]?” Rose asked.

“M-man… Only for 2 rounds, I’m very tired already!! N-NOW. I’M SUPER DUPER TIRED!!” you shouted.

Kanaya and Rose Laughed.

“[Name], you need this. So you can go to the prom!” Kanaya said.

“Kanaya’s right. So you can lose some weight!” Rose added.

“Okay. Okay. Just… D-don’t make it… Harder…” You said.

“But, [Name], it would be unfair to us. We need to make it harder so you can lose your fatty weight!” Kanaya said.

“WHHHHHHAAAAAATTTT!?!?!?!?? N-N-NO WAY!!!” you shouted.

And this is the start to solve your problem. Kanaya and Rose are helping you so you can go to the prom next next next month. But you need it. So that, many students will stop teasing you. During Saturday, Sunday and no classes, you go exercise also go to gym with Kanaya and Rose.  

Sometimes, they pushing you too hard. That sometimes you think that they’re torture you. Like your taekwondo class when you’re young. Running in 10 rounds, push ups, pull ups and everything hard.  Also, Kanaya told you to not to eat too much food, which is make your surprise. GOODNESS. EVEN IN FOOD, YOU NEED TO LESSEN IT!? OMFG. Man, you love food so much, everytime you go to a restaurant, you ordered, 3-5 food. AND YOU EAT ALL OF IT. But now, Kanaya let you to order ONLY 2 food. OR sometimes, one order only. You sighed in disappointment.

Geez, one to two orders only..!? You’re still hungry at that rate! But you need it too. So you do it.

Few weeks have been passed, you already fast in running, not tired easily like you old self, and not eating much food. You felt that you’re losing your weight. But you’re still shy, always wearing big nerdy glasses and, wearing ponytails or sometimes, pigtails.

Kanaya always told you that stop wearing those nerdy glasses, and wear in ponytail and pigtail. Still, you’re doing it. Even sometimes, Kanaya mad at you because of that. You told her it’s REALLY HOPELESS, No one will like you and NO MAN will date with you, even Dave. So Rose and Kanaya forcing you again and again until….

-3 months later, the day of prom.- ~Dave’s PoV~

I was walking around and find a date in the prom. I was currently looking at [Name], but she’s not here. So I’m just sitting and waiting for nothing. Until my sister, Rose called me.

“Dave Strider!!” Rose called. And I turned back. I wonder why she’s calling me. Maybe she’ll… Annoy me again.

“What do you want.” I asked. Then Rose started to whisper at me.

“I know you’re crushing at [Name], the chubby cute girl, isn’t?” she whispered.

My eyes go wide. H-How did she know!? I kept secret to everyone, but only person knows about it is John.

“W-Wha!? H-How d-did you know!?” I whispered too.

“Well. I knew that you kept looking at her on big time.” She whispered. “Well, there she is. She’s with Kanaya.” She added.

And then, I saw a cute and beautiful girl that she’s arguing with... Kanaya. Is she’s [Name]…?

My eyes go wide when I saw her. [Name].. She’s not fat anymore! She’s become sexy and hot! I almost got nosebleed there.

She’s… Got more beautiful and cuter…

~Reader’s PoV~

“K-Kanaya!! It’s to much already!!” You said.

“[Name], you don’t need to wear in ponytail or an ugly pigtail. Just make your hair wave~”” Kanaya said.

YOU MENTALLY FACEPALMED. Why Kanaya must be like that. But at least, she helped you. But already too much. Why.. Later, someone called your name.

“[Name]! [Name]!!” A voice said. You looked back, your eyes go wide. Guess who? DAVE STRIDER. HE. SERIOUSLY. CALLED. YOU!

“O-Oh.. H-Hey…” You shyly said.

“I… I didn’t expect that… You been changed… A lot but… Your shyness… Is still… There…” Dave shyly said too.

“Oh! U-Uh… Yeah…” You shyly said.

“By the way… Do... You want to... Dance with... Me? And…, Do you want… To be my prom date..?” He asked.

Your face has been stained in red because of that. Your big crush, Dave Strider, wants to dance to with you! Is this a miracle? You seldom talk to him about school works only! But this… Never…

“Hey, [Name]! It’s your chance!” Rose whispered.

And you and Dave started to dance. Many students are watching you. And asking their friend that who is the girl dancing with Dave. But none of them knows the answer. Even Jane.
But many men are staring at you. Some of them are drooling at you. They’re like… They inlove at you at first sight..?

But you don’t mind them. Later, IT was the slow dance. But you wanted to hide and eat.

“Uh… D-Dave.. I-I gonna eat first…” You said, then you run away. And hide. Man, you’re scared already. You know why? Because many girls seems mad at you.

You knew it that Dave is heartrob in your school. Man, why Dave choose you to his prom date? There’s so many beautiful girls in this school, why you? Man, you’re really really scared. Later, someone’s kicked you.

“Ack!! T-That hurts…” You said. And you turned back. It was the girls from the prom! They seem mad at you…

“How dare you that you’re flirting to our Dave..!?” The leader said.

Now. You’re doomed. You started to run. And screamed.

“H-Help!!!!” You shouted. Until you bumped something soft. “Offff!!!”

“Oh hey! Finally, I found you!” The voice said.

Wait. That Voice… You looked up, and It’s Dave! “Hey. W-what happened?” He asked.

“J-Just let me hide me!!” You said.

“Tell me what’s wrong!!” He asked. And you pointed those girls. You’re really REALLY scared at them. When the girls saw you, hiding near Dave, they started to jawdropped.

“Hey. What the hell that you’re chasing [Full Name]?” He asked. And all the girls shouted in surprise.

“WHAT!? IS THAT THE FAT WOMAN!?” The girls asked.

“Yes. Why you got a problem?” He said. And he gripped your hands and you guys are walked away.

“Uh… T-Thank y-you… For saving me…” You said.

“No problem, [Name].” He said too. Then he takes your chin, titling toward to  his face.

“Uh… D-Dave… Strider..?” You give Dave a confused look. And he kissed you though your lips. You got shocked for awhile but you kiss him back.

But Dave suddenly broke the kiss. And you, your face has been stained in red.

“Well... Uh... I have to admit… I… Like you. Even you’re fat. Still I like you.” He admits. Your eyes go wide when you’re realize that he like… YOU!

“Same… I..Have to a-admit… I-I like you too…” You admit it too. Then Dave hugged you. And you got blushed again.

“I’m Happy that you like me back.” He said. And later, the music stopped.

It’s the time to announce for who will be the Prom queen and king. Man, you sure you will NEVER be  prom queen. But you’re very sure that Dave will be the prom king.
Now the announcer is here.

“Hello everyone in this great prom day! Now I’m here to announce for who will be the Prom king and queen!”

Some of the students are shocked, worried or they having goosebumps right now. Except you and Dave. You guys are only calm.

“Okay.. The Prom King is… Dave Strider!” The announcer said. Then all the students are giving him a warm of applause.

And Dave go to the stage and then the announcer crowned him. The clapping have died out when the announcer will tell who will be the prom queen. You sure YOU’LL NEVER BE A PROM QUUEN. Even you’re slim already, still, it’s hopeless.

“Now… I gonna tell it. I knew many of you will surprised she’s been bullied many times but she’s never get angry! But She’s really fitted to a queen! Okay, the prom queen is… [FULL NAME]!!!!” The announcer said. Your eyes going wide because of surprise.  Your friend, Jane, pushed you lightly.

“W-Whoa!!”

“Congrats, [Name]! Now, go to the stage!” Jane said.

And you shyly go to the stage, also, you’re blushing. And you been crowned to be a prom queen. You’re very happy that you been crowned to be a prom queen. You didn’t expecting it.

“I’m happy that you become my queen, huh?” Dave said. “Uh... Yeah... I’m happy too that… You’re my king..” You said, and you smiled.

Later, many people yelled to Dave to kiss his queen. Eh!? S-seriously!?

Dave smirked. He takes your chin once again, tilting to his face, then, he kissed you again. You got shocked. You instantly kiss back. And many people got squealed. Later the both of you pulled away.

“Will you be my girlfriend, [Name]?” He whispered.

You giggled. “O-of course, Dave…” you whispered. And you hugged him.

I’m so happy… Thank you Kanaya, Rose... And Jane...
-Sorry for my grammar and it's okay to criticize! c:-
HOLY- I'M IN PANIC MODE AGAIN!!! :iconomgpanicplz:

So yeah. I made a One shot. Just to practice. = =;;

And this is MY LONGEST STORY I EVER MADE. This one took me 7 pages on word. = =''

And I'm currently making Prussia x reader request. :iconsulkplz: I'M SUCH A SLOW WORKER.

I hope you like it!

EDIT: Okay, I changed it, okay?

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Story (C): :iconsilverreira:

Homestuck, Dave Strider (C): :iconandrewhussieplz:

You (C): :iconsexydaveplz:

Art (C): :iconmariyei: VISIT HER DA ACCOUNT. SHE'S SUCH A GREAT ARTIST. :D
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